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| OK so I figured I'd shoot this over here to get some critisism. Not that I think this is particularly good, it was my first try and I think I went to far out for literally downloading Audition, Sound Forge and Acid Pro the day before, but this is what I did. I mentioned this in my initial post, basically the vocals on it sound a bit too robotic for my tastes and for some reason they slowed down transitioning Benetar's vocs onto the Sabbath tune. Once you hear it, if you could just shoot me some tips as to how to improve on this, that would be great. Thanks so much. |
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I think you've already answered most of your questions Tuesday, but i'd suggest you try and get a vocalist to sing the words, or failing that, a lot of work on the vocal would hopefully bring the desired results.
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| The arrangement is spot on, but you're right, those vocals are all over the place. You can manually adjust the number of beats assigned to a loop in acid' properties tabs. That should give you a hand with getting things locked together a bit more. You might even try slowing the Sabbath track up a bit to bring it more in line with Pat. Not too shabby for a first try though. |
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